Wednesday, October 11, 2006

picnic

casino beach
parking lot
thursday night

red car
black dog
white teeth

popeye's
dark meat
spicy

zz top
sharp dressed man
j geils band
centerfold

water spouts
thunder
lightning

CRA-A-A-A-CK
BOOM
white
black

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

charmingly frantic

tiger barbs said...

thanks

Anonymous said...

reminds me of REM's "end of the world as we know it". i mean that in a good way. just in case you hate REM or something. [grin]

quibbles: the CRA-C-K and BOOM! the italics and bold seem out of place. like it better without the obvious accenting of the sounds. actually, not emphasising them might lend the words a bit more power.

tiger barbs said...

thanks for the suggestion, twif. i'll try that.

i really like REM's "end of the world as we know it" [a lot]. i'm flattered.